Re: LoA II #1

feeds@yuku.com (Lucid Lady) — Mon, 19 Apr 2004 15:55:23 GMT

That was so so sad.

Sarah, Lucid Lady
~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"Some rise by sin and some by virtue fall.
Some run from brakes of ice and answer none,
And some condemned for a fault alone."
(William Shakespeare, Measure for Measure)

Re: LoA II #1

feeds@yuku.com (WhiteZeo) — Mon, 19 Apr 2004 08:54:15 GMT

So, this scene like plagued me. Couldn't figure out how to start it; LJ gives the gory details. *giggles* But now, I think it's good. :) Good scene. *pats scene*

Sugarplum is gonna hate me for this. *chuckle*

Off to Philosophy! :)

***

Merrick tossed and turned angrily in his sleep. The blankets were wound around his torso. Off the side of the cot, his legs dangled. His arms were thrown over his eyes. A frown permanently spread over his lips in his unruly...

Re: LoA II #1

feeds@yuku.com (WhiteZeo) — Wed, 07 Apr 2004 21:31:40 GMT

Thanks for the feedback, Sarah!

So, if any of you read my LJ, you might remember me LJing about a month back about a depressing Animus scene that I wrote ahead of schedule because of divine inspiration a la "My Immortal" by Evanescence.

This is that scene.

Re: LoA II #1

feeds@yuku.com (Lucid Lady) — Sun, 04 Apr 2004 13:17:39 GMT

AWW... how sweet!!! Ok now I'm tempted to sing "Thane and Rei sitting in a tree......" but I'll refrain.

I enjoyed the last one as well. I must agree that Ava is busted. Can't wait to see what happens with that thread of the story. Then again I can't wait to see what happens with Thane and Rei either.

Sarah,...

Re: LoA II #1

feeds@yuku.com (WhiteZeo) — Sun, 04 Apr 2004 10:15:23 GMT

Thank you ladies for the feedback. Somehow, I knew Sugarplum would be happy about the aura AND that Ava wasn't going to get away with hiding Merrick. *laughs*

As I was writing this scene, I realized that it actually goes before the scene in "LoA II #20". However, I'm not going to switch the parts around because there is nothing really...

Re: LoA II #1

feeds@yuku.com (Sugarplum7) — Sun, 28 Mar 2004 11:38:21 GMT

This isn't all I'm gonna do. I'll Sugarplum later. But I had to post something! ::giggles::

A conversation about auras! ::claps::

Snaps for Zee! ::snaps::

I said this before, but I'll say it again. I *heart* Priya! ::claps::

~Sugarplum

Re: LoA II #1

feeds@yuku.com (WhiteZeo) — Sun, 28 Mar 2004 11:21:10 GMT

So, this scene is like in complete dedication to Sugarplum and her fascination with auras. *laughs*

***

"What are blue auras?"

"What?"

Priya stopped rubbing the bar of soap against the wet dress laid against the floor and blinked at her surrogate daughter. "What are you talking about, Ava?"

Ava shrugged casually, continuing to rinse a pair of white socks in the tub of...

Re: LoA II #1

feeds@yuku.com (WhiteZeo) — Sat, 20 Mar 2004 20:21:37 GMT

Thanks for the feedback, ladies!

Let's see... There are two scenes here; the first one turned out to be shorter than I had expected, so I wanted to post it with another scene so that it didn't look scrawny. *giggle*

Enjoy the fruits of my Spring Break!

***

"General, High Priest Vanault would like for the ascension to...

Re: LoA II #1

feeds@yuku.com (Sugarplum7) — Sat, 06 Mar 2004 14:11:12 GMT

Hey! Look! Its me! Its me and I actually read the parts! Can I get more cookies? ::giggles:: No, cookies are not needed. ::giggles:: I am just playing with our great little inside joke thing. ^_^ I am paying my debt in full! There isnt any sort of interest that I have to pay that I dont know about? I sure hope not!

LoA II #15

Quote:
Zee originally wrote:

Ava stopped her brush in mid-stroke,...

Re: LoA II #1

feeds@yuku.com (Lucid Lady) — Sat, 06 Mar 2004 11:29:44 GMT

Only in a PRWF fic would you see a line like "Stop looking at my aura."

I think Ava is just the right kind of person that Merrick needs in his life right now. She's just as cranky as he is.

Sarah, Lucid Lady
~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"Some rise by sin and some by virtue fall.
Some run from brakes of ice...

Re: LoA II #1

feeds@yuku.com (WhiteZeo) — Fri, 05 Mar 2004 17:19:02 GMT

It is my mission to put Sugarplum in Sugarplumming debt. *giggles*

***

"You're a magic user, aren't you?"

Ava snapped her head to her right, looking at the disheveled Merrick who stood in the entrance into the kitchen from the short hall. "What makes you think that?" She gingerly pulled her hand away from where it had been held up before the flames of the newly-started fire.

Though he had spent the entire night tossing and turning, barely...

Re: LoA II #1

feeds@yuku.com (Sugarplum7) — Mon, 23 Feb 2004 01:34:43 GMT

You put out another part! I have to Sugarplum three in one! ::sighs::

"If you kill Thane, I'm gonna shoot you with a water gun."

And along those same joke-y lines, you having me Sugarplum three parts in one Sugarplum . . .

You are trying to kill me with your plastic hammer, aren't you?

Three in one! Dude! And you have me so wanting to catch up!

~Sugarplum

Re: LoA II #1

feeds@yuku.com (WhiteZeo) — Mon, 23 Feb 2004 01:02:34 GMT

I'm starting to think that doing my homework on time, listening to Chantal Kreviazuk, and writing around midnight is the key to turning out decent parts of LoA. *grin*

I'm on a roll! (which will probably not resume until Thursday now *giggle*)

***

"LET ME SEE HIM!"

"High Priestess, you can't-"

"He's my husband!" She glared at him. He...

Re: LoA II #1

feeds@yuku.com (Sugarplum7) — Sun, 22 Feb 2004 13:21:31 GMT
But I just have to post this!

::giggles:: So I am now a goddess. You've said it multiple times and Tigger joined you in calling me a goddess last night. ::giggles:: So I am a goddess. The goddess of what exactly? Now that is the question!

~Sugarplum

::giggles and rushes out:: (The more fic I Sugarplum now, the sooner I can get to this! ::giggles:: )

Re: LoA II #1

feeds@yuku.com (tptigger) — Sun, 22 Feb 2004 09:22:26 GMT
Whoa.

And now we see the Merrick we've come to know and love in PRWF starting to take shape.

This, of course, still leaves the burning question of why he gave Shayla (what I presume was) an engagement necklace.

Zee, you totally rock, keep it coming.

Re: LoA II #1

feeds@yuku.com (WhiteZeo) — Sun, 22 Feb 2004 02:33:28 GMT
Sugarplum, we should get together more often. It seems like whenever we get together, I can write scenes! *laughs*

The goddess herself helped facilitate this scene today (yesterday!) and it was popped at 1 AM to the delight of Zee. *grin*

***

Restless, Merrick tossed and turned on the small cot and hay-stuffed mattress that served as...

Re: LoA II #1

feeds@yuku.com (Sugarplum7) — Fri, 06 Feb 2004 11:53:38 GMT
But I just have to say this! Zee, rocks! Wheeee! Update! We got an update! Update! We got an update! ::dances::

What was that? I should be reading things for classes and doing homework? Not frolicking and traipsing around on Ranger Comm? Really? Pfft! ::laughs::

~Sugarplum

I've had this scene unfinished for awhile, and then suddenly, the last few paragraphs to end it came to me this morning as I am doing laundry. ...

Re: LoA II #1

feeds@yuku.com (Sugarplum7) — Fri, 23 Jan 2004 13:17:27 GMT
Goodness me! I fell behind! Like more than I usually let myself fall behind! And I was like stealthy about it. ::laughs:: I talked about the new banner instead of the new part, and you automatically thought it was a Sugarplum when you thought back all those days later. See, now that is like stealthy power or something. ::giggles::

So I am...

LoA II #1

feeds@yuku.com (WhiteZeo) — Sun, 24 Aug 2003 02:15:45 GMT
Welcome to the second legend of "Legends of Animaria"! *claps* I'm very excited as I begin this new legend as I also enter into a new phase of life, like many of the characters now do. Of course, I imagine my new life is a bit more happier and lively than those of our beloved Animarians.

At the end of the first legend, we left off with...