Hi WhiteZeo!
I am being very productive today. No, really. I am. I love that feeling. That feeling that you have actually completed something. Heehee! Even though most of that feeling is from leaving people feedback, I still have it, and Im proud of it! Heehee! So . . . I totally thought this part was awesome. It was. Go you! Go, WhiteZeo. Its yo birthday. We gon party like its yo birthday. Sorry. I dont know why I have 50 Cent stuck in my head. I really dont. ::shakes head:: I need to get something else stuck in there. What is good at getting stuck? Hmm . . .
But yeah! This totally rocked with . . . the sadness. LOL! I think I am too excited to be leaving something for this right now, but I am going to go ahead and do this because I want to.
You were so right on with the Mave-ness. I wont say Go you! again because that would just result in the 50 Centness again. But you so totally rocked! It gave us even more insight into his character. The person he is, the person he was, the way he is feeling, it is all in there and completely Mave.
Aww. I take no credit. This was all you and your beautiful mind. I just . . . shoved in the right direction. ::grin:: I was more of a mirrored wall if you will. You kind of proposed and I reflected and bounced it back to you. I take no credit. It was all you!
Interesting. White instead of black. I like it. It does make sense. And would these white clothes that he is now wearing resemble what weve seen the ancient warriors wear in those flashbacks? If it is . . . I wonder what it was that they were mourning. On second thought, never mind. I think I will want to cross that bridge later on, but not right now. One tragedy is enough for me, thank you.
Ohhh! Poor Mave. Someone needs a hug. Big time! ::hugs Mave:: Itll be okay. And it wasnt your fault. He didnt fail Ephane. I hate it when characters are plagued with guilt that is totally unfounded. But I bet that it makes them a little more fun for you to play with sometimes, doesnt it, WhiteZeo? Poor guy. Hopefully Merrick will be found soon. Id hate to see what happens to Mave if Merrick isnt okay. Ephane, Opaline, and then possibly something happening to Merrick on top of it all? This guy is going to be in pieces when you are done with him. Isnt he, WhiteZeo?
Maves such a nice guy. He really is. He is only in it because he likes the work. If only Vanault was a little more like Mave. Then maybe he wouldnt be as messed up as he is. Ah, who am I kidding? I like Vanault just the way he is. Does that make me one sick little Sugarplum? Or perhaps one sick little Stitch is better?
Now that is a pretty good question posed. I wonder if we will find out? I personally think that his loyalty should pay off in the end. Perhaps something good comes from it. See, now that would be good. I think that Mave deserves a little happiness after all these harmful thoughts haunting him. Dont you think so? I think they could all use a little light. But who am I kidding? Haha! This whole thing just started. I bet they are nowhere near the light that is at the end of this tunnel.
I loved it WhiteZeo! I really did. That was a great working of Mave-y-ness. I dont think you had anything to worry about. You worked your magic, like you always do, and made what you wrote fantastic. ::nods:: Youre awesome!
I think I should have just quoted the entire thing and just wrote Fantastic under it with a nice pretty star right beside it! One star? I must not be paying attention. This deserved at least like ten stars.
And just like that, I think I am all caught up on the feedbacking. I love this feeling of accomplishment. Lol!
~Stitch
Ohana means family. Family means nobody gets left behind or forgotten.
~ Lilo & Stitch ~
I am being very productive today. No, really. I am. I love that feeling. That feeling that you have actually completed something. Heehee! Even though most of that feeling is from leaving people feedback, I still have it, and Im proud of it! Heehee! So . . . I totally thought this part was awesome. It was. Go you! Go, WhiteZeo. Its yo birthday. We gon party like its yo birthday. Sorry. I dont know why I have 50 Cent stuck in my head. I really dont. ::shakes head:: I need to get something else stuck in there. What is good at getting stuck? Hmm . . .
But yeah! This totally rocked with . . . the sadness. LOL! I think I am too excited to be leaving something for this right now, but I am going to go ahead and do this because I want to.
You were so right on with the Mave-ness. I wont say Go you! again because that would just result in the 50 Centness again. But you so totally rocked! It gave us even more insight into his character. The person he is, the person he was, the way he is feeling, it is all in there and completely Mave.
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WhiteZeo originally wrote:
Thanks for the feedback, Sugarplum! Also a big thanks to both Tigger and Sugarplum, who have been helping me sketch out this scene for the past few weeks.
Aww. I take no credit. This was all you and your beautiful mind. I just . . . shoved in the right direction. ::grin:: I was more of a mirrored wall if you will. You kind of proposed and I reflected and bounced it back to you. I take no credit. It was all you!
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WhiteZeo originally wrote:
The dark, honorable blue was no longer appropriate; the stark and unemotional white reflected the sorrow that had come with Opaline's death.
Interesting. White instead of black. I like it. It does make sense. And would these white clothes that he is now wearing resemble what weve seen the ancient warriors wear in those flashbacks? If it is . . . I wonder what it was that they were mourning. On second thought, never mind. I think I will want to cross that bridge later on, but not right now. One tragedy is enough for me, thank you.
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WhiteZeo originally wrote:
His best friend died and he couldn't save him, now his wife had died and he wasn't able to save her either. He was no best friend; he'd failed Ephane so completely.
Ohhh! Poor Mave. Someone needs a hug. Big time! ::hugs Mave:: Itll be okay. And it wasnt your fault. He didnt fail Ephane. I hate it when characters are plagued with guilt that is totally unfounded. But I bet that it makes them a little more fun for you to play with sometimes, doesnt it, WhiteZeo? Poor guy. Hopefully Merrick will be found soon. Id hate to see what happens to Mave if Merrick isnt okay. Ephane, Opaline, and then possibly something happening to Merrick on top of it all? This guy is going to be in pieces when you are done with him. Isnt he, WhiteZeo?
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WhiteZeo originally wrote:
Mave never thought ill of the younger man or felt that anything had been stolen from him. Animus was the better soldier at the time, with his unparalleled strategic ability. Mave had never been concerned about receiving glory or feeling honored; being a soldier was his life, not something he did to achieve something greater. It was the only thing he did because he loved it and that was that.
Maves such a nice guy. He really is. He is only in it because he likes the work. If only Vanault was a little more like Mave. Then maybe he wouldnt be as messed up as he is. Ah, who am I kidding? I like Vanault just the way he is. Does that make me one sick little Sugarplum? Or perhaps one sick little Stitch is better?
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WhiteZeo originally wrote:
He failed Ephane though; his loyalty had weakened. He couldn't save the woman who had been his best friend's life. The woman for whom he had given his own life. He had been loyal to her to the end. What could Mave say of his own fidelity?
Now that is a pretty good question posed. I wonder if we will find out? I personally think that his loyalty should pay off in the end. Perhaps something good comes from it. See, now that would be good. I think that Mave deserves a little happiness after all these harmful thoughts haunting him. Dont you think so? I think they could all use a little light. But who am I kidding? Haha! This whole thing just started. I bet they are nowhere near the light that is at the end of this tunnel.
I loved it WhiteZeo! I really did. That was a great working of Mave-y-ness. I dont think you had anything to worry about. You worked your magic, like you always do, and made what you wrote fantastic. ::nods:: Youre awesome! I think I should have just quoted the entire thing and just wrote Fantastic under it with a nice pretty star right beside it! One star? I must not be paying attention. This deserved at least like ten stars.
And just like that, I think I am all caught up on the feedbacking. I love this feeling of accomplishment. Lol!
~Stitch
Ohana means family. Family means nobody gets left behind or forgotten.
~ Lilo & Stitch ~
